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Post by Satoshi Arata on Sun Aug 31, 2008 5:26 pm

Name: Satoshi Arata

Age: 21

Gender: Male

Village: Ex-Hidden Leaf

Ninja Rank: Missing-Nin (Would like to apply for Akatsuki - or Akatsuki Leader - when it becomes available).

Clan: Arata

Looks:

Personality: Satoshi is a little reserved - he doesn't talk more often than he has to, and only acts when it is necessary. He is calm, level-headed and quick thinking, although a little sarcastic. He finds menial tasks boring, opting out of them whenever possible. He is very confident in his abilities, and enjoys any challenge - if only to overcome it.

Special Characteristics: Kekkei Genkai, Yuuyamime (Yuu-yah-mee-may, Dusk Eye). This bloodline ability is rare, even within the Arata clan that it belongs to. The bearer's eyes are always obsidian black, with a tiny white pupil in the centre. It allows the user to see in any conditions (fog, darkness etc.), through most objects (walls, boxes etc.), and for up to one thousand metres into the distance. When the eyes are covered (closed or blindfolded), the user is able to see the outlines of everything. This doesn't put any strain on the eyes. However, everthing appears in black and white (eyes open or closed). The eyes also appear to grant the user certain Genjutsu techniques, and increase the power of any Genjutsu the bearer uses. Using them in this way can put stress on the eyes.

Elements: Fire & Lightning.

Skills/Specialties: Genjutsu, ninjutsu.

Items/Weapons:

Satoshi wears a belt that has six pockets for storing items attached to it. In the pockets there are:

-20 Kunai
-30 Shuriken
-10 Exploding tags
-10 Pouches filled with multiple small exploding tags
-10 'Five senses confusion' tags
-5 Soldier pills, 3 jars of healing salve

Also, strapped to his back is one thin, finely crafted steel katana.

History/Background Story: Satoshi was born in Konohagakure, twenty-one years ago. He and his family lived on the outskirts of the village, and weren't well-known or wealthy. They led a normal, uneventful life. Satoshi's father was a sword smith, his mother a stall-owner. They led a quiet life, somewhat removed from the rest of society.

When Satoshi was five years old, one day he went to work with his mother, because she wasn't able to find someone to look after him. Losing his mother in the hustle and bustle of the streets, Satoshi found his way to his father's workplace instead. There was no one around, so Satoshi decided to pretend to be his father while he was gone. He played with the hammer and the anvil, before noticing the furnace. Trying to reach the poker inside, he knocked it askew and sent coals and sparks flying. A shower of red hot sparks flew into Satoshi's face. His father found him, twenty minutes later, unconscious and with burns across his eyes and face.

After a short stay in hospital, his burns healed. However, the medical staff told his parents that he would be blind, and that the scars on his eyes would never heal. It wasn't long before Satoshi took to wearing a blindfold, to hide his disfigured eyes. His other senses were sharpened, and he was able to cope with his disability very well. He grew up as a normal child.

At eleven years old, he began to train to be able to defend himself. Most of his friends had joined the shinobi academy, and Satoshi wanted to feel a little less different. The training, of course, was not a success. Furious, he began to wear the blindfold around his neck, straining his eyes so that they would work again. Months of this passed, and his parents became worried about his behaviour. When they questioned him, he became angry and stormed out on them. It was at this point, that a hidden ability appeared to Satoshi.

The Kekkei Genkai of the Arata clan had been mocked by society - the clan not being able to produce a member that bore their secret. Most members eventually gave up on the supposed 'Dusk Eye'. The text history of the clan stated that a deserved member would reveal the ability, but for hundreds of years after that book had been written, no one had been able to attain it. Until that night, when Satoshi Arata managed it. Falling to the floor, his eyes pulsed inside his head. When the throbbing stopped, he looked up and around. He was able to see, albeit in black and white. He could see in more detail than before, and much much further. A few minutes after revelling in his gift, the eyes began to hurt again, forcing Satoshi to cover them up with a blindfold.

He spent months discovering his ability. He found he could see through objects such as walls or boxes; and pinpoint an item or person from over six hundred metres away. Even when he closed his eyes or put a blindfold on, he could see as normal. When he tried 'seeing through' a person, the boy he targeted collapsed, and wasn't brought around until he was taken to the hospital. Unsure of what had happened, Satoshi didn't dare use his eyes on another person again.

Now that he could see again, he joined the academy a year after his friends. Surprising the other students and his teachers, he graduated at the same time as them. However, when he was given a team to join, the trouble started. He was taunted and teased behind his sensei's back, the teammates jealous and afraid of him. His feelings of difference grew and grew the more time he spent in their company. Not saying a word, not wanting to show weakness, he soldiered on. Eventually, he snapped, turning on his teammate with his eyes. The Genin collapsed, just as the boy had done before. It took longer to bring him around this time, and the Genin spent three days unconscious in the hospital. Satoshi was trained alone, which he hated despite his teammates treatment of him. He felt increasingly cut off from society.

He was entered into the Chuunin exams, being watched very carefully by his elders, who worried about him using his eyes. However, he progressed far enough without them to attain the rank of Chuunin, though he didn't win in the final round. At this point, he was expected to train more and more without a teacher. His parents were too busy with work, and his mother had another baby on the way - they didn't notice how Satoshi was feeling. Without a word to anyone, he left the village, using his eyes once more on the guard at the gate.

Since then, he has wandered from village to village, spending little time in each. He has trained, learning more about his eyes and what they can do. He became skilled in Genjutsu and medical skills - both were able to help him survive as a 'criminal'. He has, to this day, killed no one. He occasionally returns to Konohagakure's borders. Not stupid enough to try to enter the village, he left messages with the guards for his family, and especially his younger brother, who he never met. He began to act as a mercenary, taking jobs that make use of his unique talents in return for hefty payments. He is now well-known in the criminal circles, being employed very often.

Roleplay Sample: In the main cavern, two men were deep in conversation. One was quite bulky and very muscular, the other quite lithe but athletic. They were both mercenaries, hired by a man who they hadn't even met. The larger one, Garu, had just finished securing another prisoner. The other was called Satoshi, and he had been tinkering with a small metal object until Garu had approached him.

Quite suddenly, they looked up and alert when they heard the faint sounds of conflict in the distance. "Trouble?" Garu grunted. Walking towards the adjoining tunnel, Satoshi replied in a sound barely more than a whisper. "Maybe, I'll look." He pulled the cloth blindfold back over his head, revealed pitch black eyes with tiny white pupils. A moment or two later, he pulled the cloth back down over his eyes and walked back to Garu. "Company." He muttered, opening the
pouch attached to his upper thigh. Garu grinned and stood up, flexing his arms, legs and neck. Garu was indeed very bulky and muscular, nearly twice the size of the average man. "Honestly Garu," Sighed Satoshi wearily, "He won't be here for a few minutes yet." Satoshi had a wad of tags in his hand, and was placing them all over the cavern.

When he was done, after fifty or so tags had been strategically placed, he faced his partner once more. "Now you can start." Garu made a hand sign, muttering under his breath. A second later, his body had dissolved into the ground. Satoshi readjusted his blindfold, keeping it covering his eyes. He drew a thin katana and waited for the intruder.


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Post by Satoshi Arata on Sun Aug 31, 2008 5:56 pm

Ninjutsu:

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Name: Basic Academy Jutsu
Rank: E
Description: Kawarimi, Bunshin, Henge, Nawanuke (Substitution, Clone, Transformation, Rope Escape).
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Name: Basic Genin Jutsu
Rank: D
Description: Kinobori, Kabenobori , Suimen Hokou no Gyou (Tree-climbing, Wall-climbing, Water-walking).
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Name: Jibaku Fuda: Kassei (Exploding Tag: Activate)
Rank: E
Description: Utilizing chakra, the user is able to activate the explosion mechanism of a distant bomb tag.
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Name: Kai (Release)
Rank: D
Description: Forming a single hand seal, the user is capable of avoiding the effects of or escaping from a Genjutsu. The more powerful the Genjutsu, the more difficult it is to avoid or escape from.
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Name: Utsusemi no Jutsu (Projection Technique)
Rank: C
Description: Using this jutsu, the user can project their voice from various points in a specific area in a manner similar to ventriloquism. The user does not need to speak to transmit the sound, so tracking them by sound is impossible. Those in the area where the voice is being projected at will hear a resonating echo, as well as a more ominous undertone.
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Name: Sakura Fubuki no Jutsu (Cherry Blossom Blizzard Technique)
Rank: C
Description: The user hurls several kunai at their opponent, each with a small sack of miniature explosive tags attached. The opponent, while deflecting the kunai, will cause the sacks to break and scatter the tags on themselves and the area around them. The user merely has to throw another kunai with an explosive tag to ignite them, thus catching the target in an immense explosion.
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Name: Gokan Sakusou (Five Senses Confusion Disorder)
Rank: C
Description:
An explosive note disperses an odorless powder. Once it is in the air the target will inhale the toxin. The gas will confuse the opponent's senses and slow down their reaction time. Even when the target tries to dodge the attack, they will be unable to correctly manoeuvre to avoid
it. This allows the user to attack freely and have a higher chance to injure their target.
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Name: Youma no Jutsu (Ghost Technique)
Rank: B
Description: The user's body becomes transparent, and his/her molecules disperse, allowing their body to pass through solid objects. Attacks do not harm them when this is in effect. However, it can only be sustained for a very short amount of time, or it will do permanent damage to the user's biological structure - either killing them and disfiguring them permanently.
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Name: Chakra Kyuin Jutsu (Chakra Absorption Technique)
Rank: B
Description: This jutsu allows the user to absorb the physical and spiritual energy of an opponent. The user has to make contact with the opponent to drain any energy. A blue aura surrounds the user's hand when they activate this technique.
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Name: Kiru Bansho: Boka no Jutsu (Leech All Creation: Attack Prevention Technique)
Rank: B
Description: Using this jutsu, the user can merge with another object and take on its properties to avoid any damage. In the manga, Orochimaru uses this to merge with a tree just before his battle with his former student, Anko Mitarashi. He, however, does not give it a name.
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Name: Hien (Flying Swallow)
Rank: B
Description: Using chakra to extend the blades of his weapons, Jiro attacks his opponent. The chakra can inflict injury even if the blade does not hit.
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Name: Kage Bunshin no Jutsu (Shadow Clone Technique)
Rank: B
Description: Similar to the Clone Technique, this jutsu creates clones of the user. Unlike the Clone Technique, these clones are actual copies, not illusions. The user's chakra is evenly distributed among every clone, giving each clone an equal fraction of the user's overall power. The clones are capable of performing jutsu on their own and can even bleed, but will usually disperse after one or two solid blows. Unlike other clones, they can't be detected by the Byakugan because the clones have the exact same amount of chakra and aren't made from any other substance, making them indistinguishable from the actual person. Any experience the clones gain during their existence is transferred to the user once they are dispersed.
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Name: Ranshinshou (Chaotic Mental Collision)
Rank: A
Description: Changing the chakra in his/her hand into electricity, the user can create an electric field to disrupt his/her targetís nervous system. Because the brain and body communicate using electrical impulses, it can be used to disrupt her targets ability to move. What results is commands to move one body part being relayed to another, making it near impossible for them to move unless they have high skill and understanding of the body.
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Name: Shuiken Kage Bunshin no Jutsu (Shuriken Shadow Clone Technique)
Rank: A
Description: A modification of the Shadow Clone Technique, the user throws one shuriken at the victim and then uses this jutsu to create multiple copies of the shuriken to make the attack more powerful.
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Elemental Techniques:

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Name: Doutsuu (Conduction)
Rank: C
Elements: Lightning
Description: Doutsuu is a Ninjutsu technique using the lightning element. The user channels lightning-natured chakra into a metal weapon (kunai or shuriken for example). When the electrically charged weapon hits something, it deals additional lightning-based damage.
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Name: Raizume (Lightning Hoof)
Rank: C
Elements: Lightning
Description: Using the natural electricity of the body, the user pulls out electricity and covers one foot with it, or if the foot is booted, the boot of the foot. The electricity is then transferred to an opponent via a kick.
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Name: Raitsume (Lightning Claw)
Rank: C
Elements: Lightning
Description: Using the natural electricity of the body, the user pulls out electricity and coats the fingers of one hand in it. The electricity is then transferred to an opponent via a finger-jab or claw-slash.
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Name: Denbaku no Jutsu (Electric Explosion Technique)
Rank: B
Elements: Lightning
Description: This technique creates a small ball of compressed electrical energy in the user's hand. It is then shot at the target and explodes upon contact with another object. The explosion is relatively small, but can still take out multiple people.
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Name: Shougekiha (Shockwave)
Rank: A
Elements: Lightning
Description: The user crosses their arms in front of their torso and gathers lightning natured chakra into their arms. When enough chakra has been gathered, the user throws their arms back to their sides and releases the chakra. It travels, in the form of a large waves of electricity, towards the opponent at a high speed. When it connects, the target it forced against it as it continues traveling. All the while, the subject is having the intense electric current run through their body. When the attack fades, the subject is released from its "grasp".
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Name: Hibanaku (Spark Kick)
Rank: D
Elements: Fire
Description: This simple Fire technique requires no hand signs, only a concentration of chakra to one foot. The user will lift their foot and give it a gentle scuff-kick against the ground, producing a single spark capable of igniting flammable material.
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Name: Hosenka no Jutsu (Phoenix Immortal Fire Technique)
Rank: C
Elements: Fire
Description: This jutsu sends multiple balls of fire at a target. It is also possible to hide shurikens within the fireballs, creating an unexpected secondary surprise attack.
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Name: Karyuu Endan (Fire Dragon Flame Projectile)
Rank: B
Elements: Fire
The user blows a large jet of fire from their mouth.
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Name: Haisekisho (Ash Product Burning)
Rank: A
Elements: Fire
Description: Unlike other fire-based jutsu, this jutsu allows the user to breathe out a cloud of superheated ash capable of causing third-degree burns. Because it is ash and not flame, the ash remains in the air around the target, and therefore remains potent for a longer period. The ash is able to be ignited by a flame.
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Name: Shi Ude Kouen (Four Arm Flame)
Rank: A
Elements: Fire
Description: The user concentrates fire-natured chakra into their hands, then buries them into the ground. Almost immediately, four large, blazing tendrils burst from the floor (eight feet tall - that is also their range of attack). They can be controlled by the user, and inflict severe burns to whatever or whomever they touch. The user can also command them to individually 'explode' in flames.
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Post by Satoshi Arata on Sun Aug 31, 2008 5:57 pm

Genjutsu:

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Name: Teguchi Meimu (Illusion Trick)
Rank: -
Description: This technique, acheived through specific training, allows the user to form hand seals for a Ninjutsu technique, whilst actually performing a Genjutsu. The target is caught unawares. There are some Genjutsu techniques that cannot be performed this way.
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Name: Magen: Narakumi no Jutsu (Demonic Illusion: Hell Viewing Technique)
Rank: D
Description: This jutsu causes the target to see a horrifying vision. First, an imaginary circle of leaves will spin around and envelop the target, falling away shortly after. After a short period, the illusion will begin. This is to make the illusion more convincing, since the user will likely have
moved before the illusion sets in.
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Name: Kasumi Jusha no Jutsu (Mist Servant Technique)
Rank: D
Description: This jutsu creates clones that phase in and out of the ground as if they were made of a blackish, oil-like liquid. When attacked, the clones regenerate themselves. The clones can be controlled to make it seem as if they're throwing kunai. The user can then time their attacks with those of the clones.
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Name: Magen: Kokoni Arazu no Jutsu (Demonic Illusion: False Surroundings Technique)
Rank: C
Description: This jutsu changes the appearance of a nearby object or area.
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Name: Kori Shinchu no Jutsu (Sly Mind Affect Technique)
Rank: C
Description: This jutsu causes the enemy to walk around in circles for hours by making it seem as if they're walking straight to their desired destination. The enemy eventually becomes exhausted after traveling the same path over and over.
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Name: Magen: Jigoku Koka no Jutsu (Demonic Illusion: Descending Hell Technique)
Rank: B
Description: This jutsu causes creates the illusion of a tremendous ball of fire in the sky, which then crashes onto a designated area. Anyone in the area will instinctively flee.
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Name: Magen: Niju Kokoni Arazu no Jutsu (Demonic Illusion: Double False Surroundings Technique)
Rank: B
Description: This jutsu places another illusion on top of a previous illusion created by the user. If and when the target dispels the first illusion, they will not realize that a second is in place.
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Name: Kyuusho Sesshu (Secret Theft)
Rank: B
Description: This Genjutsu allows the user to delve into the target's memories, find a particularly disturbing one, and re-enact it or find a happy memory and create their own twisted version. All the while, the target is suffering extreme distress, and the user can attack their now helpless form in reality.
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Name: Yuukoku (Eventide)
Rank: B
Description: If the user comes under attack, he/she can use this technique to cover their escape. The light around the area (natural or unnatural) appears to fade, and the user's body seems to do the same. Moments later, the light returns but the user has moved to a different place.
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Name: Yuuyami no Tate (Dusk Shield)
Rank: B
Description: Exclusive to those with the Yuuyamime, this Genjutsu creates a haze of darkness near the user (in front, behind, at side, above, below). Any oncoming attack that isn't physically and directly applied (taijutsu is physically and directly applied, for example) by the opponent is absorbed by the darkness, which then fades away.
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Name: Shikumi no Jutsu (Death Forseeing Technique)
Rank: A
Description: This jutsu is much like the Temporary Paralysis Technique, but paralyzes the foe by showing them a vision of their own gruesome death. In addition to the paralysis, the enemy is overwhelmed with fear, and will no doubt suffer severe mental stress.
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Name: Futsunushi (Deity of Swords)
Rank: A
Description: This technique resembles the Uchiha clan's Mangekyo Sharingan's Susanoo. It summons an entity of similar size and appearance, only the entity is a warrior wielding two swords - Futsunushi. Futsunushi attacks the opponent with his swords, weapons that can cut through any metal or armor.
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Name: Raiju (Thunder Beast)
Rank: A
Description: Raiju is the pet of the Raijin (the God of Thunder). Satoshi's Yuuyamime allows him to summon Raiju through a Genjutsu technique (although Raiju himself is real). He will appear either as a fire beast or a lightning beast, and will assume the form of either a cat, a tanuki (raccoon-dog), a monkey, a wolf or a weasel. Each form is almost the size of a grown man. It can move at incredible speeds, and if he touches someone other than Satoshi, they will be injured (either burnt by his fire, or electrified by his lightning).
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Name: Daikokuten (God of Great Darkness)
Rank: A
Description: This technique makes the target imagine a blow to his or her eyes, which causes the target's vision to fail, inducing utter darkness. The target then believes themselves to have been blinded. Only by striking the user can they end the effect.
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Name: Dou Osore (Body Horror)
Rank: S
Description: The Genjutsu can be activated as soon as the user strikes the target. In the Genjutsu, the user can reach into the target's body, their hand going through the flesh as if it were butter. They can damage or remove the target's insides, or just plunge their hand into the body in various places. In reality, this jutsu is almost as dangerous, causing actual internal injuries to the body parts that are being targeted in the Genjutsu. If the user attacks the heart or brain, the target has mere seconds to stop the technique or they will die.
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Name: Osore no Doutai (Kinetophobia)
Rank: S
Description: This fearful Genjutsu is initiated by looking into another's eyes, and is only attainable through the Arata clan Kekkei Genkai - the Yuuyamime. As it takes effect, the target's vision becomes blurred and shapes are no longer distinguishable. The real effect of the technique, however, activates when the target moves. The second that they move any part of their body, a horror will befall them. For example, if their leg moves, they will discover that the floor has disappeared, and they are falling in the dark. If they try to reach out to someone, their bones in their hand and arm will break. Trying to call out results in loss of voice, and then an intense choking sensation, as if blades are caught in the target's throat. Ultimately, the user of this technique chooses what will happen. Eventually, the target becomes too frightened to move at all. Indeed, Kinetophobia is a fear of moving. In reality, the target is bound by their own fear as their mind slowly deteriorates. If the user of the technique loses concentration, the target has a small chance to escape (only until the user regains concentration), by inflicting heavy damage on themselves or by using a powerful releasing jutsu.
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Post by Satoshi Arata on Sun Aug 31, 2008 5:59 pm

Razz I was writing out the jutsu as you posted. I edited the Akatsuki bit, but put in brackets that I'd like to be considered for it when it does become available. Thanks. Very Happy
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Post by Matamo on Sun Aug 31, 2008 6:33 pm

Satoshi Arata wrote:Ninjutsu:

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Name: Basic Academy Jutsu
Rank: E
Description: Kawarimi, Bunshin, Henge, Nawanuke (Substitution, Clone, Transformation, Rope Escape).
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Name: Basic Genin Jutsu
Rank: D
Description: Kinobori, Kabenobori , Suimen Hokou no Gyou (Tree-climbing, Wall-climbing, Water-walking).
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Name: Jibaku Fuda: Kassei (Exploding Tag: Activate)
Rank: E
Description: Utilizing chakra, the user is able to activate the explosion mechanism of a distant bomb tag.
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Name: Kai (Release)
Rank: D
Description: Forming a single hand seal, the user is capable of avoiding the effects of or escaping from a Genjutsu. The more powerful the Genjutsu, the more difficult it is to avoid or escape from.
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Name: Utsusemi no Jutsu (Projection Technique)
Rank: C
Description: Using this jutsu, the user can project their voice from various points in a specific area in a manner similar to ventriloquism. The user does not need to speak to transmit the sound, so tracking them by sound is impossible. Those in the area where the voice is being projected at will hear a resonating echo, as well as a more ominous undertone.
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Name: Youma no Jutsu (Ghost Technique)
Rank: B
Description: The user's body becomes transparent, and his/her molecules disperse, allowing their body to pass through solid objects. Attacks do not harm them when this is in effect. However, it can only be sustained for a very short amount of time, or it will do permanent damage to the user's biological structure - either killing them and disfiguring them permanently.
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Name: Hien (Flying Swallow)
Rank: B
Description: Using chakra to extend the blades of his weapons, Jiro attacks his opponent. The chakra can inflict injury even if the blade does not hit.
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Name: Kage Bunshin no Jutsu (Shadow Clone Technique)
Rank: B
Description: Similar to the Clone Technique, this jutsu creates clones of the user. Unlike the Clone Technique, these clones are actual copies, not illusions. The user's chakra is evenly distributed among every clone, giving each clone an equal fraction of the user's overall power. The clones are capable of performing jutsu on their own and can even bleed, but will usually disperse after one or two solid blows. Unlike other clones, they can't be detected by the Byakugan because the clones have the exact same amount of chakra and aren't made from any other substance, making them indistinguishable from the actual person. Any experience the clones gain during their existence is transferred to the user once they are dispersed.
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Name: Shuiken Kage Bunshin no Jutsu (Shuriken Shadow Clone Technique)
Rank: A
Description: A modification of the Shadow Clone Technique, the user throws one shuriken at the victim and then uses this jutsu to create multiple copies of the shuriken to make the attack more powerful.
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Name: Bunshin Daibakuha (Clone Great Explosion)
Rank: A
Description: This jutsu works in combination with the Shadow Clone Technique to create a shadow clone that will explode on command. The blast created is considerable, and could potentially kill an attacker engaged in hand-to-hand combat.
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Name: Jutsu Sho (Technique Neutralize)
Rank: A
Description: This jutsu cancels or impedes the occurring of the opponent's technique. It uses the same amount of chakra as the jutsu it intends to cancel.
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Name: Kuchiyose - Edo Tensei (Summoning - Resurrection to the Impure World)
Rank: S
Description: Edo Tensei is a Ninjutsu technique which had been forbidden because of its dark nature. The technique involves the summoning of dead souls from the afterlife back into the real world. Normally Kuchiyose (summoning) involves the use of the caster's blood as compensation for summoning, Edo Tensei is different though. The ninja will first sacrifice a living person to provide the vessel that the dead soul will inhabit. The dead body will then be encased in ash and dirt to resemble the soul of the person that was resurrected. When the ninja wishes to recall the souls, a portal will open in the ground and the caskets holding the bodies will appear. When the caskets open the bodies will be grey and in a state of minor decay. At this point the dead souls are able to remember their past life, but they are at the command of the one who summoned them. One final act will fully wipe out their conscious and make them under the command of the one who summoned them. The ninja will place a fuda (charm/tag) of some form into the head of the body. This will then give vitality back to the body and make it a pure killing machine.
When a portion of the dead body is damaged, the ash and dust will merely return and fix the damaged body part. The only way currently known to stop the resurrected person, is to utilize the Shiki Fuujin technique and remove the soul from the body.
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Elemental Techniques:

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Name: Shougekiha (Shock wave)
Rank: A
Elements: Lightning
Description: The user crosses their arms in front of their torso and gathers lightning natured chakra into their arms. When enough chakra has been gathered, the user throws their arms back to their sides and releases the chakra. It travels, in the form of a large waves of electricity, towards the opponent at a high speed. When it connects, the target it forced against it as it continues traveling. All the while, the subject is having the intense electric current run through their body. When the attack fades, the subject is released from its "grasp".
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Name: Hachi Ude Kouen (Eight Arm Flame)
Rank: A
Elements: Fire
Description: The user concentrates fire-natured chakra into their hands, then buries them into the ground. Almost immediately, eight huge, blazing tendrils burst from the floor. They can be controlled by the user, and inflict severe burns to whatever or whomever they touch. The user can also command them to individually 'explode' in flames.
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Medical:

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Name: Chakra no Mesu (Chakra Scalpel)
Rank: B
Description: After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja will focus chakra to their hands. When their charged hands reach the body of their target, they can extend the chakra internally into the targets body to cut and neatly slice their muscles and blood vessels without harming the surface skin. This technique can be used in battle, but because of its hectic nature, the fine precision required for an instant kill is not feasible. Damage can still be done to the vital organs, but the technique should be used carefully in battle.
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Kossetsu no Jutsu- (Bone Fracture Skill)
Rank: B
Description:
The Kossetsu no jutsu utilizes the medical-Nin's proficiency at determining the weakest spot in his/her enemy's bone. Then, the Chakra no Mesu is used at that exact same spot in order to fracture the bone. A second hit is likely to break the bone completely. A lot of concentration is needed in order to apply enough damage to a small spot in the bone, therefore it lacks means to hurt any other tissue in the body.
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Chakra Gekiyaku (Chakra Poisoning Technique)
Rank: B
Description:
By making the required hand seals and focusing chakra into the fingertips, the user can 'stab' the target with his fingers. There will be no visible wound, but the target's inner coil system will slowly be infected with the negative chakra input. From that point on, every time the target tries to mold chakra, he/she'll weaken. Normally, the effect wears off after a couple of hours, but multiple stabs increase the effect.
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Name: Chakra Kyuin Jutsu (Chakra Absorption Technique)
Rank: B
Description: This jutsu allows the user to absorb the physical and spiritual energy of an opponent. The user doesn't have to actually touch the opponent, since it is also possible to use it through other media, the only necessary condition is some medium through which chakra can be channeled. As such, Jiro is able to extend this effect beyond his own body and channel it into his weaponry as well.
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Name: Ranshinshou (Chaotic Mental Collision)
Rank: A
Description: Changing the chakra in his/her hand into electricity, the user can create an electric field to disrupt his/her targetís nervous system. Because the brain and body communicate using electrical impulses, it can be used to disrupt her targets ability to move. What results is commands to move one body part being relayed to another, making it near impossible for them to move unless they have high skill and understanding of the body.
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Name: Shousen Jutsu (Mystical Palm Technique)
Rank: A
Description: This jutsu is a medical technique used by medic-nin to heal wounds. The user concentrates chakra to their hand and applies it to a wound, speeding up cell regeneration.
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Name: Dokunuki no Jutsu (Poison Extraction Technique)
Rank: A
Description: This ornate jutsu uses chakra to literally pull foreign materials from someone's body, no doubt requiring precise control on the user's part to avoid causing further internal injuries to their patient. It is quite difficult to perform properly.
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Other:

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Name: Sakura Fubuki no Jutsu (Cherry Blossom Blizzard Technique)
Rank: C
Description: The user hurls several kunai at their opponent, each with a small sack of miniature explosive tags attached. The opponent, while deflecting the kunai, will cause the sacks to break and scatter the tags on themselves and the area around them. The user merely has to throw another kunai with an explosive tag to ignite them, thus catching the target in an immense explosion.
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Name: Gokan Sakusou (Five Senses Confusion Disorder)
Rank: C
Description:
An explosive note disperses an odorless powder. Once it is in the air the target will inhale the toxin. The gas will confuse the opponent's senses and slow down their reaction time. Even when the target tries to dodge the attack, they will be unable to correctly manoeuvre to avoid
it. This allows the user to attack freely and have a higher chance to injure their target.
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Name: Kuchiyose - Edo Tensei (Summoning - Resurrection to the Impure World)
Rank: S
Description: Edo Tensei is a Ninjutsu technique which had been forbidden because of its dark nature. The technique involves the summoning of dead souls from the afterlife back into the real world. Normally Kuchiyose (summoning) involves the use of the caster's blood as compensation for summoning, Edo Tensei is different though. The ninja will first sacrifice a living person to provide the vessel that the dead soul will inhabit. The dead body will then be encased in ash and dirt to resemble the soul of the person that was resurrected. When the ninja wishes to recall the souls, a portal will open in the ground and the caskets holding the bodies will appear. When the caskets open the bodies will be grey and in a state of minor decay. At this point the dead souls are able to remember their past life, but they are at the command of the one who summoned them. One final act will fully wipe out their conscious and make them under the command of the one who summoned them. The ninja will place a fuda (charm/tag) of some form into the head of the body. This will then give vitality back to the body and make it a pure killing machine.
When a portion of the dead body is damaged, the ash and dust will merely return and fix the damaged body part. The only way currently known to stop the resurrected person, is to utilize the Shiki Fuujin technique and remove the soul from the body.

lol no for that jutsu.

Name: Chakra Kyuin Jutsu (Chakra Absorption Technique)
Rank: B
Description: This jutsu allows the user to absorb the physical and spiritual energy of an opponent. The user doesn't have to actually touch the opponent, since it is also possible to use it through other media, the only necessary condition is some medium through which chakra can be channeled. As such, Jiro is able to extend this effect beyond his own body and channel it into his weaponry as well

A little over powered.

Name: Jutsu Sho (Technique Neutralize)
Rank: A
Description: This jutsu cancels or impedes the occurring of the opponent's technique. It uses the same amount of chakra as the jutsu it intends to cancel.

no
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Re: Satoshi Arata

Post by Matamo on Sun Aug 31, 2008 6:34 pm

And just so u know if you want until we open Akatsuki you can join my ORG
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Post by Satoshi Arata on Sun Aug 31, 2008 6:56 pm

I'll sort those in the morning (is night here). Razz Although all those jutsu you highlighted are canon (from anime/manga) and not custom.
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Post by Lucifer on Sun Aug 31, 2008 9:05 pm

Satoshi you cannot use ninjutsu since you dont have it as a skill the only ninjutsu your allowed to have are the basic academy jutsu.
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Post by Satoshi Arata on Mon Sep 01, 2008 4:56 am

I edited the profile, removing medical and adding ninjutsu. I removed Edo Tensei (because too powerful, even if a canon jutsu), I removed Jutsu Sho too and added a few more techniques. I toned down the Chakra Kyuin Jutsu.
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Post by Lucifer on Mon Sep 01, 2008 10:39 am

Name: Jibaku Mandara (Self-desstruction Mandala)
Rank: S
Description: This jutsu creates a pyramid-like chakra cage around an opponent. The user must maintain a triangle-shaped hand seal at all times to maintain the cage. Holding the triangle seal, the user can draw their hands together to cause the walls of the jail pyramid to collapse inwards and crush his opponent to an infinitesimal size.
The prison is said to be unbreakable, unless the user removes the spell and ends the jutsu. However, if another manages to disrupt the triangle seal it will cause the hold of the pyramid to weaken and allow the trapped ninja to break free if a sufficient enough force is exerted. The resulting break will release a huge explosion of energy that can level much of the surrounding area.

You cannot have this jutsu becouse it was exclusively from the fuuma clan if you want this jutsu you have to change your characters clan to the fuuma clan.
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Re: Satoshi Arata

Post by Satoshi Arata on Mon Sep 01, 2008 11:04 am

Removed it.
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Re: Satoshi Arata

Post by Matamo on Mon Sep 01, 2008 11:17 am

Satoshi Arata wrote:Ninjutsu:

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Name: Basic Academy Jutsu
Rank: E
Description: Kawarimi, Bunshin, Henge, Nawanuke (Substitution, Clone, Transformation, Rope Escape).
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Name: Basic Genin Jutsu
Rank: D
Description: Kinobori, Kabenobori , Suimen Hokou no Gyou (Tree-climbing, Wall-climbing, Water-walking).
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Name: Jibaku Fuda: Kassei (Exploding Tag: Activate)
Rank: E
Description: Utilizing chakra, the user is able to activate the explosion mechanism of a distant bomb tag.
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Name: Kai (Release)
Rank: D
Description: Forming a single hand seal, the user is capable of avoiding the effects of or escaping from a Genjutsu. The more powerful the Genjutsu, the more difficult it is to avoid or escape from.
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Name: Utsusemi no Jutsu (Projection Technique)
Rank: C
Description: Using this jutsu, the user can project their voice from various points in a specific area in a manner similar to ventriloquism. The user does not need to speak to transmit the sound, so tracking them by sound is impossible. Those in the area where the voice is being projected at will hear a resonating echo, as well as a more ominous undertone.
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Name: Sakura Fubuki no Jutsu (Cherry Blossom Blizzard Technique)
Rank: C
Description: The user hurls several kunai at their opponent, each with a small sack of miniature explosive tags attached. The opponent, while deflecting the kunai, will cause the sacks to break and scatter the tags on themselves and the area around them. The user merely has to throw another kunai with an explosive tag to ignite them, thus catching the target in an immense explosion.
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Name: Gokan Sakusou (Five Senses Confusion Disorder)
Rank: C
Description:
An explosive note disperses an odorless powder. Once it is in the air the target will inhale the toxin. The gas will confuse the opponent's senses and slow down their reaction time. Even when the target tries to dodge the attack, they will be unable to correctly manoeuvre to avoid
it. This allows the user to attack freely and have a higher chance to injure their target.
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Name: Youma no Jutsu (Ghost Technique)
Rank: B
Description: The user's body becomes transparent, and his/her molecules disperse, allowing their body to pass through solid objects. Attacks do not harm them when this is in effect. However, it can only be sustained for a very short amount of time, or it will do permanent damage to the user's biological structure - either killing them and disfiguring them permanently.
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Name: Chakra Kyuin Jutsu (Chakra Absorption Technique)
Rank: B
Description: This jutsu allows the user to absorb the physical and spiritual energy of an opponent. The user has to make contact with the opponent to drain any energy. A blue aura surrounds the user's hand when they activate this technique.
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Name: Kiru Bansho: Boka no Jutsu (Leech All Creation: Attack Prevention Technique)
Rank: B
Description: Using this jutsu, the user can merge with another object and take on its properties to avoid any damage. In the manga, Orochimaru uses this to merge with a tree just before his battle with his former student, Anko Mitarashi. He, however, does not give it a name.
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Name: Hien (Flying Swallow)
Rank: B
Description: Using chakra to extend the blades of his weapons, Jiro attacks his opponent. The chakra can inflict injury even if the blade does not hit.
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Name: Kage Bunshin no Jutsu (Shadow Clone Technique)
Rank: B
Description: Similar to the Clone Technique, this jutsu creates clones of the user. Unlike the Clone Technique, these clones are actual copies, not illusions. The user's chakra is evenly distributed among every clone, giving each clone an equal fraction of the user's overall power. The clones are capable of performing jutsu on their own and can even bleed, but will usually disperse after one or two solid blows. Unlike other clones, they can't be detected by the Byakugan because the clones have the exact same amount of chakra and aren't made from any other substance, making them indistinguishable from the actual person. Any experience the clones gain during their existence is transferred to the user once they are dispersed.
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Name: Ranshinshou (Chaotic Mental Collision)
Rank: A
Description: Changing the chakra in his/her hand into electricity, the user can create an electric field to disrupt his/her targetís nervous system. Because the brain and body communicate using electrical impulses, it can be used to disrupt her targets ability to move. What results is commands to move one body part being relayed to another, making it near impossible for them to move unless they have high skill and understanding of the body.
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Name: Shuiken Kage Bunshin no Jutsu (Shuriken Shadow Clone Technique)
Rank: A
Description: A modification of the Shadow Clone Technique, the user throws one shuriken at the victim and then uses this jutsu to create multiple copies of the shuriken to make the attack more powerful.
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Name: Bunshin Daibakuha (Clone Great Explosion)
Rank: A
Description: This jutsu works in combination with the Shadow Clone Technique to create a shadow clone that will explode on command. The blast created is considerable, and could potentially kill an attacker engaged in hand-to-hand combat.
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Elemental Techniques:

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Name: Doutsuu (Conduction)
Rank: C
Elements: Lightning
Description: Doutsuu is a Ninjutsu technique using the lightning element. The user channels lightning-natured chakra into a metal weapon (kunai or shuriken for example). When the electrically charged weapon hits something, it deals additional lightning-based damage.
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Name: Raizume (lightning Hoof)
Rank: C
Elements: Lightning
Description: Using the natural electricity of the body, the user pulls out electricity and covers one foot with it, or if the foot is booted, the boot of the foot. The electricity is then transferred to an opponent via a kick.
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Name: Raitsume (Lightning Claw)
Rank: C
Elements: Lightning
Description: Using the natural electricity of the body, the user pulls out electricity and coats the fingers of one hand in it. The electricity is then transferred to an opponent via a finger-jab or claw-slash.
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Name: Denbaku no Jutsu (Electric Explosion Technique)
Rank: B
Elements: Lightning
Description: This technique creates a small ball of compressed electrical energy in the user's hand. It is then shot at the target and explodes upon contact with another object. The explosion is relatively small, but can still take out multiple people.
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Name: Shougekiha (Shockwave)
Rank: A
Elements: Lightning
Description: The user crosses their arms in front of their torso and gathers lightning natured chakra into their arms. When enough chakra has been gathered, the user throws their arms back to their sides and releases the chakra. It travels, in the form of a large waves of electricity, towards the opponent at a high speed. When it connects, the target it forced against it as it continues traveling. All the while, the subject is having the intense electric current run through their body. When the attack fades, the subject is released from its "grasp".
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Name: Hibanaku (Spark Kick)
Rank: D
Elements: Fire
Description: This simple Fire technique requires no hand signs, only a concentration of chakra to one foot. The user will lift their foot and give it a gentle scuff-kick against the ground, producing a single spark capable of igniting flammable material.
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Name: Hosenka no Jutsu (Phoenix Immortal Fire Technique)
Rank: C
Elements: Fire
Description: This jutsu sends multiple balls of fire at a target. It is also possible to hide shurikens within the fireballs, creating an unexpected secondary surprise attack.
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Name: Karyuu Endan (Fire Dragon Flame Projectile)
Rank: B
Elements: Fire
The user blows a large jet of fire from their mouth.
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Name: Haisekisho (Ash Product Burning)
Rank: A
Elements: Fire
Description: Unlike other fire-based jutsu, this jutsu allows the user to breathe out a cloud of superheated ash capable of causing third-degree burns. Because it is ash and not flame, the ash remains in the air around the target, and therefore remains potent for a longer period. The ash is able to be ignited by a flame.
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Name: Hachi Ude Kouen (Eight Arm Flame)
Rank: A
Elements: Fire
Description: The user concentrates fire-natured chakra into their hands, then buries them into the ground. Almost immediately, eight huge, blazing tendrils burst from the floor. They can be controlled by the user, and inflict severe burns to whatever or whomever they touch. The user can also command them to individually 'explode' in flames.
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Name: Bunshin Daibakuha (Clone Great Explosion)
Rank: A
Description: This jutsu works in combination with the Shadow Clone Technique to create a shadow clone that will explode on command. The blast created is considerable, and could potentially kill an attacker engaged in hand-to-hand combat.

Cant have it.

Name: Hachi Ude Kouen (Eight Arm Flame)
Rank: A
Elements: Fire
Description: The user concentrates fire-natured chakra into their hands, then buries them into the ground. Almost immediately, eight huge, blazing tendrils burst from the floor. They can be controlled by the user, and inflict severe burns to whatever or whomever they touch. The user can also command them to individually 'explode' in flames.

Over powered a little much.
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Post by Satoshi Arata on Mon Sep 01, 2008 11:36 am

Fixed.
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Post by Matamo on Mon Sep 01, 2008 11:50 am

Satoshi Arata wrote:Genjutsu:

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Name: Teguchi Meimu (Illusion Trick)
Rank: -
Description: This technique, acheived through specific training, allows the user to form hand seals for a Ninjutsu technique, whilst actually performing a Genjutsu. The target is caught unawares. There are some Genjutsu techniques that cannot be performed this way.
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Name: Magen: Narakumi no Jutsu (Demonic Illusion: Hell Viewing Technique)
Rank: D
Description: This jutsu causes the target to see a horrifying vision. First, an imaginary circle of leaves will spin around and envelop the target, falling away shortly after. After a short period, the illusion will begin. This is to make the illusion more convincing, since the user will likely have
moved before the illusion sets in.
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Name: Kasumi Jusha no Jutsu (Mist Servant Technique)
Rank: D
Description: This jutsu creates clones that phase in and out of the ground as if they were made of a blackish, oil-like liquid. When attacked, the clones regenerate themselves. The clones can be controlled to make it seem as if they're throwing kunai. The user can then time their attacks with those of the clones.
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Name: Magen: Kokoni Arazu no Jutsu (Demonic Illusion: False Surroundings Technique)
Rank: C
Description: This jutsu changes the appearance of a nearby object or area.
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Name: Kori Shinchu no Jutsu (Sly Mind Affect Technique)
Rank: C
Description: This jutsu causes the enemy to walk around in circles for hours by making it seem as if they're walking straight to their desired destination. The enemy eventually becomes exhausted after traveling the same path over and over.
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Name: Magen: Jigoku Koka no Jutsu (Demonic Illusion: Descending Hell Technique)
Rank: B
Description: This jutsu causes creates the illusion of a tremendous ball of fire in the sky, which then crashes onto a designated area. Anyone in the area will instinctively flee.
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Name: Magen: Niju Kokoni Arazu no Jutsu (Demonic Illusion: Double False Surroundings Technique)
Rank: B
Description: This jutsu places another illusion on top of a previous illusion created by the user. If and when the target dispels the first illusion, they will not realize that a second is in place.
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Name: Kyuusho Sesshu (Secret Theft)
Rank: B
Description: This Genjutsu allows the user to delve into the target's memories, find a particularly disturbing one, and re-enact it or find a happy memory and create their own twisted version. All the while, the target is suffering extreme distress, and the user can attack their now helpless form in reality.
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Name: Yuukoku (Eventide)
Rank: B
Description: If the user comes under attack, he/she can use this technique to cover their escape. The light around the area (natural or unnatural) appears to fade, and the user's body seems to do the same. Moments later, the light returns but the user has moved to a different place.
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Name: Yuuyami no Tate (Dusk Shield)
Rank: B
Description: Exclusive to those with the Yuuyamime, this Genjutsu creates a haze of darkness near the user (in front, behind, at side, above, below). Any oncoming attack that isn't physically and directly applied (taijutsu is physically and directly applied, for example) by the opponent is absorbed by the darkness, which then fades away.
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Name: Shikumi no Jutsu (Death Forseeing Technique)
Rank: A
Description: This jutsu is much like the Temporary Paralysis Technique, but paralyzes the foe by showing them a vision of their own gruesome death. In addition to the paralysis, the enemy is overwhelmed with fear, and will no doubt suffer severe mental stress.
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Name: Futsunushi (Deity of Swords)
Rank: A
Description: This technique resembles the Uchiha clan's Mangekyo Sharingan's Susanoo. It summons an entity of similar size and appearance, only the entity is a warrior wielding two swords - Futsunushi. Futsunushi attacks the opponent with his swords, weapons that can cut through any metal or armor.
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Name: Raiju (Thunder Beast)
Rank: A
Description: Raiju is the pet of the Raijin (the God of Thunder). Satoshi's Yuuyamime allows him to summon Raiju through a Genjutsu technique (although Raiju himself is real). He will appear either as a fire beast or a lightning beast, and will assume the form of either a cat, a tanuki (raccoon-dog), a monkey, a wolf or a weasel. Each form is almost the size of a grown man. It can move at incredible speeds, and if he touches someone other than Satoshi, they will be injured (either burnt by his fire, or electrified by his lightning).
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Name: Daikokuten (God of Great Darkness)
Rank: A
Description: This technique makes the target imagine a blow to his or her eyes, which causes the target's vision to fail, inducing utter darkness. The target then believes themselves to have been blinded. Only by striking the user can they end the effect.
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Name: Dou Osore (Body Horror)
Rank: S
Description: The Genjutsu can be activated as soon as the user strikes the target. In the Genjutsu, the user can reach into the target's body, their hand going through the flesh as if it were butter. They can damage or remove the target's insides, or just plunge their hand into the body in various places. In reality, this jutsu is almost as dangerous, causing actual internal injuries to the body parts that are being targeted in the Genjutsu. If the user attacks the heart or brain, the target has mere seconds to stop the technique or they will die.
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Name: Osore no Doutai (Kinetophobia)
Rank: S
Description: This fearful Genjutsu is initiated by looking into another's eyes, and is only attainable through the Arata clan Kekkei Genkai - the Yuuyamime. As it takes effect, the target's vision becomes blurred and shapes are no longer distinguishable. The real effect of the technique, however, activates when the target moves. The second that they move any part of their body, a horror will befall them. For example, if their leg moves, they will discover that the floor has disappeared, and they are falling in the dark. If they try to reach out to someone, their bones in their hand and arm will break. Trying to call out results in loss of voice, and then an intense choking sensation, as if blades are caught in the target's throat. Ultimately, the user of this technique chooses what will happen. Eventually, the target becomes too frightened to move at all. Indeed, Kinetophobia is a fear of moving. In reality, the target is bound by their own fear as their mind slowly deteriorates. If the user of the technique loses concentration, the target has a small chance to escape (only until the user regains concentration), by inflicting heavy damage on themselves or by using a powerful releasing jutsu.
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Name: Osore no Doutai (Kinetophobia)
Rank: S
Description: This fearful Genjutsu is initiated by looking into another's eyes, and is only attainable through the Arata clan Kekkei Genkai - the Yuuyamime. As it takes effect, the target's vision becomes blurred and shapes are no longer distinguishable. The real effect of the technique, however, activates when the target moves. The second that they move any part of their body, a horror will befall them. For example, if their leg moves, they will discover that the floor has disappeared, and they are falling in the dark. If they try to reach out to someone, their bones in their hand and arm will break. Trying to call out results in loss of voice, and then an intense choking sensation, as if blades are caught in the target's throat. Ultimately, the user of this technique chooses what will happen. Eventually, the target becomes too frightened to move at all. Indeed, Kinetophobia is a fear of moving. In reality, the target is bound by their own fear as their mind slowly deteriorates. If the user of the technique loses concentration, the target has a small chance to escape (only until the user regains concentration), by inflicting heavy damage on themselves or by using a powerful releasing jutsu.

WAY OVER POWERED

Name: Dou Osore (Body Horror)
Rank: S
Description: The Genjutsu can be activated as soon as the user strikes the target. In the Genjutsu, the user can reach into the target's body, their hand going through the flesh as if it were butter. They can damage or remove the target's insides, or just plunge their hand into the body in various places. In reality, this jutsu is almost as dangerous, causing actual internal injuries to the body parts that are being targeted in the Genjutsu. If the user attacks the heart or brain, the target has mere seconds to stop the technique or they will die.

No for this one

Name: Yuuyami no Tate (Dusk Shield)
Rank: B
Description: Exclusive to those with the Yuuyamime, this Genjutsu creates a haze of darkness near the user (in front, behind, at side, above, below). Any oncoming attack that isn't physically and directly applied (taijutsu is physically and directly applied, for example) by the opponent is absorbed by the darkness, which then fades away.

No to that one also
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Post by Satoshi Arata on Mon Sep 01, 2008 12:07 pm

Dusk Shield I will tone down, but what's wrong with the others? Compare them to the Mangekyo techniques - Amaterasu (the huge, super-powered flame that cannot be extinguished), Tsukuyomi (the practically inescapable Genjutsu that physically damages the target in a world completely controlled by the user, where one minute of torture seems like a month) and Susanoo (the shield that can absorb any attack and the sword the seals someone away if it touches them)? By comparison, my techniques are modest. If you still disagree, I'll see what I can do about toning them down - but at least consider it.
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Post by Lucifer on Mon Sep 01, 2008 2:50 pm

Please put what was your rank before turning into a missing-nin
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Post by Yondaime on Mon Sep 01, 2008 2:52 pm

Name: Osore no Doutai (Kinetophobia)
Rank: S
Description: This fearful Genjutsu is initiated by looking into another's eyes, and is only attainable through the Arata clan Kekkei Genkai - the Yuuyamime. As it takes effect, the target's vision becomes blurred and shapes are no longer distinguishable. The real effect of the technique, however, activates when the target moves. The second that they move any part of their body, a horror will befall them. For example, if their leg moves, they will discover that the floor has disappeared, and they are falling in the dark. If they try to reach out to someone, their bones in their hand and arm will break. Trying to call out results in loss of voice, and then an intense choking sensation, as if blades are caught in the target's throat. Ultimately, the user of this technique chooses what will happen. Eventually, the target becomes too frightened to move at all. Indeed, Kinetophobia is a fear of moving. In reality, the target is bound by their own fear as their mind slowly deteriorates. If the user of the technique loses concentration, the target has a small chance to escape (only until the user regains concentration), by inflicting heavy damage on themselves or by using a powerful releasing jutsu.

I like this technique. But please tone it down a little

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